One thing you need to improve on is to give just a little more information on your topics. What i mean is you had very good answers but you just need about one more sentence to talk about it a little more.
I thougt that the headings were a little boring. You need to put a little more voice on your headings then it would be great.
One thing you need to improve on is to give just a little more information on your topics. What i mean is you had very good answers but you just need about one more sentence to talk about it a little more.
ReplyDeleteI thougt that the headings were a little boring. You need to put a little more voice on your headings then it would be great.
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